writing w1 and 4 (or 5 idk i forgot)

Hi i'm back this is my reading from week 1 and w4 (i'm mostly sure but not 100%) i wrote a story and how to make a quality blog post try the blog post on my blog and i'll see how good you do (you guys are prob better then me) here are my create tasks

The year was 1952 ex marine deep diver Scott  was on a sub to investigate an alien creature roaming on the bottom of the bermuda triangle when suddenly CRASH the sub had hit something. What did they hit? *GASP* it was the alien creature “HELP THE MONSTER…” “CRRRRRRRK” sounded over the radios, we never saw those men again. Present day scott's grandson and his friend are building a treehouse but one day when they were talking in there treehouse WOSH a storm came CRACK the was so powerful it picked up the treehouse right into the bermuda triangle right where the monster is the kids were scared you could tell from the looks on there faces “hey Jeffry are you moving the treehouse” said Bob “no” said Jeffry scaredly “I thought that was you” “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH” the kids screamed when they found out there were to monsters “what are we gonna do” said Bob in terror “wait a minute those monster are playing ping pong with our treehouse as ther ball” said Jeffry “that one's gonna hit hard enough for us to fly home” said Bob happily “WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE” said the to children they land right in there tree “you boys should come inside now” said Bob’s mom

 

that is my story and this is my blog post thing